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　　DearCindy,

　　Don’t worry about yourstudy too much. First, you should learn to relax yourself, I think takingexercise and listening to music can help you. Next, you’d better have a healthyeating habit, you can never go to school without eating breakfast. Then, it’sbest to go to bed early and get up early, enough sleep can help you studybetter. At last, why not try to communicate with others who really care aboutyou? I believe you will feel better after you talk to them.

　　I hope you can go to agood high school, good luck!

　　Yours,

　　Linda

　　【解析】

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　　短語(yǔ)：

　　worryabout，taking exercise，listening to music

　　句型：

　　Next,you’d better... you can never go to school without eating breakfast.

　　Atlast, why not try to communicate with others who really care about you?

　　Then,it’s best to go to bed early and get up early,


 

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